It’s the end of April, and National Poetry Month. I’ve been reading from a number of books on Chinese poetry in translation– have to pick some up for Taiwanese poetry, too.
Here’s an opening excerpt from “Poetry Itself Is a Kind of Sunlight” by Yan Yi:
Believe me, poetry itself is a kind of sunlight
No substance has been found anywhere in the cosmos
That can break the wings of poetry.– The Red Azalea: Chinese Poetry Since the Cultural Revolution, p. 36
My paternal grandfather and great-grandfather would write poetry with their friends. My mother took out a scroll for me once, and showed me the brushed character for moon. I think there was moonlight through a window in the poem. I wish I could read their work.
Here’s a rough unfinished excerpt from mine:
I am the rice paddy, green with life,
shoots tender and sharp through the water.I am the white crane flying
through a row’s reflection on a quest
for the fish slipping through muddy lines.
And on that note, though there is more to say, I’m going to sleep.

That’s interesting to poetically “be” different things. As now I am the ink on this digital rice paper, though I’d rather eat rice with the crane if he’ll share his fish with me. I did a “I am” metaphor poem although about a woman on a bus:
Riding
I imagine you drifting
in thoughts on the bus
by the window with
a mystery package
Hear me honk
see me as the bird
that flaps a clap
applauding your reverie
On your way, squealing
with the wheeling of the bus
I am the squeaky brakes
squawking to see you; I am
the roar of the engine
Wake up. Don’t
miss your stop
don’t drop your
precious package
Arrive soon, because
I can’t wait to
open you up
to ride with me
— Douglas Gilbert
Free-verse Poetry
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Interesting poem– thanks for sharing it!
I generally keep my poetry shut up, unfinished and unseen. You’re so brave!
Mine is vaguely formed out of remembrance where the prompt was “I am from”– the “I” in my poems flits about from mythological characters to flowers and other people and sometimes me. I remember reading something about the ecstatic Sufi poets and how their beloveds were generally God. Personification is fun.
In the little snippet I posted, well, “I” looks like Taiwan.
Ut, oh. If I’m “brave” it must mean that I should know that I’m probably embarrassing myself with ineptitude. But anyway, I don’t think that the Sufi’s were always so esoteric. I’ve tried to write a few poems based on the Sufi tales contained in “The Subtleties Of Mulla Nasrudin”. The Mulla is a comic figure:
Sky Truth
To end ignorance
the chef
a religious fellow,
renounced all desires,
but for the wine of truth
in great writings
A note from heaven
not a feather
he tried to get
on a beach. With a
bottle of Vermouth
he stood in search of truth,
a raw chicken cutlet in hand
looking for a chef’s promised land
that perfect recipe to make ends meet,
to make his cooking nirvana be
the ultimate stew,
but he had only torn pages
missing those spicy truths
just known to a sage,
and only a grappling hook
on a blanket to cook.
When a movie star came by to say
the truth is up there in the sky
he threw the hook up in the air
repeatedly despite the stares. My recipe
must be part of truth he said
the root of flavored
cotton candy skies. Although
before the truth he could hook
a bird of hunger just swooped
down on the cutlet
tearing it loose. Foolish
bird he shouted
how can you really make out
with recipe not in your snout?
– Douglas Gilbert
Free Verse
Oh, and about “I generally keep my poetry shut up, unfinished and unseen.” It might be Ok and salvageable, and if it’s false modesty, you’re denying the world an experience.(Although, it could be really bad, but what do I know?– The elites don’t like my stuff.)Well, I only have one other “Sufi” like or “Sufi” based thing(it’s hard for me to pretend like I’m an intellectual with the one or two old books I can allude too. When someone calls my bluff, I’m in trouble, because I know little about literature, only try to know a few buzz words to bluff my way around{but I’m actually a pretty uneducated ignorant crude person.Oh well.}:
Carnegie
If I knew
where nowhere is,
I’d wander
to hear what’s there
listen anywhere music charms
be lost
be found out
She lives to arrive
at places that matter
to see a scene
be a decoration
place a mark
on a souvenir
For hours we wandered lost
seeking Carnegie Hall
As her anger trumpeted
I heard an echo of ah’s
voices savoring delights
taxis arriving with honks like geese
that made me chase a mirage
see a sign: Carnegie
I dragged us in to hear
the singers calling for chicken livers
When I saw no oboes
I knew we
had arrived
at the Carnegie Deli
I ordered hot pastrami. She
told me I was in a pickle, while
the bells of doom
pealed in my head, and
I looked for a native New Yorker
to calm her rage
tell her the address for
Carnegie Hall
While I wandered away
through chicken liver
trying to peel the onion
of my tears, to
find an appropriate tongue,
she opened her purse
reached into her anger
pulled out a jar of ultra-hot
jalapeƱo peppers
stuffed it in my sandwich
She waited to sting me, but
I was lost in gourmet ecstasy
awry in rye
like a cole slaw
waiting for slaughter
She waited to flatten my dignity
as flat as a potato pancake
By the time I returned
her hunger overwhelmed her
and she bit into my sandwich
tears streaming down her cheeks
I inquired
why she cried
Her poor deceased Mother
would have loved New York
She pushed the sandwich in my face. I ate.
She asked about my tears.
I cried too that
her Mother in heaven
left her daughter behind
with the character of
a hot pepper
The pain focussed my attention
on a ragged stranger. In payment
I offered him my sandwich, a plea:
please tell my dear wife
how to get to Carnegie Hall
Breathing like a dragon
he gasped, the address
has two 7’s and a 5
Swallowing a gallon of water
he pointed to a street musician
on the corner
I threw a sandwich
in the musician’s case
asked how I get to
Carnegie Hall
With a Knish and ambition, he said– she
ran off with him
I stayed to order a corned beef
and kept my tongue on
the best day of my life
Today she plays the violin.
I stand outside with a sax.
I’m not chopped liver though
’cause the chicks dig me
Ahh… The Carnegie Deli. I had a really good Roshashanah dinner there with a friend once.
You’re not embarrassing yourself as far as my non-elite readership is concerned. (I’m fond of the “awry in rye”).
If any of my work ever makes it to the public eye, I’ll let you know, and then we can debate its merits.
Hi there. Thought you might enjoy this: http://jkfowler.com/2009/11/09/sense/. Cheers, JK.
Thanks JK– interesting work!